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Update de_DE/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml to r42938
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rD47944: Update to r42938:
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This patch does the following:

  • makes 4.2 clearer and tightens some of the headings
  • removed reference to learn more about single-user mode as it didn't say anything more; instead, summarized single-user mode here
  • made intro to permissions clearer, the next patch will work on the rest of this section

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bhd updated this revision to Diff 11846.Jan 1 2016, 5:12 PM
bhd retitled this revision from to Update de_DE/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml to r42938.
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bcr edited edge metadata.Jan 1 2016, 6:45 PM

Habe ein paar Dinge gefunden, der Rest ist in Ordnung.

basics/chapter.xml
129 ↗(On Diff #11846)

der Satz hier ist irgendwie komisch. Entweder heisst es "... über dem Befehl oder der Datei..." oder "... über den Befehl oder die Datei...".

155 ↗(On Diff #11846)

hier muss kein Komma stehen.

190 ↗(On Diff #11846)

s/virutellen/virtuellen/

304 ↗(On Diff #11846)

wie wäre es mit " feingranularen"?

316 ↗(On Diff #11846)

hier fehlt die schliessende Klammer.

bhd updated this revision to Diff 11854.Jan 2 2016, 10:39 AM
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bhd marked 5 inline comments as done.

updated diff with suggestions by bcr.

bcr accepted this revision.Jan 2 2016, 12:05 PM
bcr edited edge metadata.

So siehts gut aus. Dankeschön!

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Jan 2 2016, 12:05 PM
Closed by commit rD47944: Update to r42938: (authored by bhd). · Explain WhyJan 2 2016, 12:22 PM
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