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Udate de_DE/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml to r40998
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Authored by bhd on Dec 20 2015, 1:59 PM.

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rD47909: Update to r40998:
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Initial content fix. This patch addresses the following:

  • missing &os; entities
  • rewording to address you, we, and general redundancy
  • adds missing directory tags
  • replaces portupgrade with portmaster
  • replaces old version examples with 9.x and 1998 names with 2013
  • makes up-to-date consistent

While here, complete r47710.

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bhd updated this revision to Diff 11497.Dec 20 2015, 1:59 PM
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bcr edited edge metadata.Dec 20 2015, 4:25 PM

Wow, ein grosses Stück Arbeit. Da ist die Menge an gefundenen Fehlern doch recht überschaubar. :-)

cutting-edge/chapter.xml
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hier brauchst du kein Komma.

1528 ↗(On Diff #11497)

Ist hier Whitespace geändert worden?

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s/übersetzten/übersetzen/

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s/Benutzten/Benutzen/

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s/erstellen/erstellten/

bhd marked 4 inline comments as done.Dec 20 2015, 4:38 PM

Vielen Dank für den Review. Die meisten Dinge habe ich angepasst.

cutting-edge/chapter.xml
1528 ↗(On Diff #11497)

Nein. In meinem Code seht sect3, title und indexterm jeweils hintereinander. Also ohne Leerzeilen dazwischen

bcr accepted this revision.Dec 25 2015, 11:44 AM
bcr edited edge metadata.

In Ordnung, kann so eingecheckt werden.

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Dec 25 2015, 11:44 AM
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