This patch addresses the following:
- replaces FreeBSD with &os;
- rewording to address "you", redundancy, poor grammar, and verbosity
- the console/login prompt was updated to amd64
Details
Details
- Reviewers
bcr - Commits
- rD47318: Update to r40856:
Diff Detail
Diff Detail
- Repository
- rD FreeBSD doc repository - subversion
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Habe ein paar Dinge gefunden. Der Rest sieht aber in Ordnung aus.
| de_DE.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml | ||
|---|---|---|
| 92 ↗ | (On Diff #8210) | dem Starten bzw. auch dem Start |
| 131 ↗ | (On Diff #8210) | Startskripte (ohne n) |
| 133 ↗ | (On Diff #8210) | dito |
| 2151 ↗ | (On Diff #8210) | s/dass/das |
| 2300 ↗ | (On Diff #8210) | s/setzten/setzen/ |
| 2487 ↗ | (On Diff #8210) | fehlt hier ein "l" (kleines L)? |
| 2542 ↗ | (On Diff #8210) | ist das hier eingerückt? Nochmal checken, müsste eigentlich normal sein... |
| 2754 ↗ | (On Diff #8210) | s/Diesse/Diese/ |