Differential D23426

Simplify IPFW in-kernel NAT section (handbook)
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Authored by driesm on Jan 30 2020, 10:33 AM.

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rD53911: - Simplify multiple sentences to remove the words: furthermore, also, ...

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Simplify multiple sentences to remove the words: furthermore, also, ...
Fix typo's, IP address is redirect_port example & double space after sentence stop.
Restructure TSO comment together with the in-kernel NAT instance paragraph.
Add kernel option for libalias full functionality.
Unify engine/facility/... to facility.

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driesm created this revision.Jan 30 2020, 10:33 AM

driesm edited the summary of this revision. (Show Details)

I only found one typo.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.xml
2279 ↗	(On Diff #67501)	s/delivey/delivery/

Fix typo pointed out by @bcr. Thanks for the review!

Harbormaster completed remote builds in B29069: Diff 67560.Jan 31 2020, 4:57 PM

I think this looks good now. I will commit it. Thank you!

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Feb 17 2020, 6:16 PM

Closed by commit rD53911: - Simplify multiple sentences to remove the words: furthermore, also, ... (authored by bcr). · Explain WhyFeb 17 2020, 6:36 PM

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