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mention the option of directly fetching the archive files when creating new jails
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Authored by albert_fsfe.org on Jun 8 2019, 1:05 PM.

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Currently, the description only mentions fetching the archives from the ISO, however imho it is more convenient
in some cases to directly fetch them from the mirrors

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albert_fsfe.org created this revision.Jun 8 2019, 1:05 PM
bcr added a subscriber: bcr.Jun 8 2019, 1:10 PM

A few minor nits. I like the use of <replaceable>s to be future proof.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml
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s/Alternativly/Alternatively/

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You can probably remove this line as the previous one already mentions the mirror, so it should be clear to the reader what to do.

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Do you need to switch to sh to do the exports or can the default shell also be used here?

i fixed the typo and followed the recommendation to remove redundant information about selecting a mirror

albert_fsfe.org planned changes to this revision.Jun 8 2019, 1:33 PM
albert_fsfe.org added inline comments.
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.xml
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i followed the other example already in this section.
setting the variables should not be a problem in the default shell,
i would have to research how to do the loop.

bcr accepted this revision.Jun 8 2019, 2:51 PM

Looks good now, thanks! I will get this committed soon.

This revision was not accepted when it landed; it landed in state Changes Planned.Jun 8 2019, 3:02 PM
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