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 OpenBOR is the open source continuation of Beats of Rage, a Streets of
 Rage tribute game originally developed by Senile Team. In the years
 since it has grown into arguably the single most powerful two
-dimensional sprite based engine in the world and certainly the most
-versatile. While intended to allow creation of side scrolling beat em'
+dimensional sprite-based engine in the world and certainly the most
+versatile. While intended to allow creation of side scrolling beat 'em
 ups like Double Dragon or Final Fight, the engine is also capable of
-replicating Shumps, RPGs, platformers and the like. A built in
+replicating shoot 'em ups, RPGs, platformers and the like. A built-in
 scripting engine allows authors to take it even further, making
 imagination the only real limit.
 
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