Index: head/games/frogatto/pkg-descr
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-Frogatto is a "platformer" or "jump-and-run" videogame.  Like many older
+Frogatto is a "platformer", or "jump-and-run" videogame.  Like many older
 arcade/nintendo/sega titles, the world is viewed as a cross-section seen
 from the side, and your character walks and jumps between solid platforms,
-whilst avoiding being hurt by monsters.  We're not a clone of any specific
-game; although just by being a platformer, it's impossible not to have
-something in common with games like Mario or Sonic.  So we are trying to
-innovate a bit.
+whilst avoiding being hurt by monsters.  It is not a clone of any specific
+game; although just by being a platformer, it is impossible not to have
+something in common with games like Mario or Sonic, but authors are trying
+to innovate a bit.
 
 Frogatto is also the protagonist's name.  It's eponymous.
 
 WWW: http://www.frogatto.com/

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