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@@ -1,49 +1,49 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
 <!--
      The FreeBSD Documentation Project
 
      $FreeBSD$
 -->
 
 <chapter xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
   xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0"
   xml:id="own-port">
 
   <title>Making a New Port</title>
 
-  <para>So, you are interested in making your own port or
-    upgrading an existing one?  Great!</para>
+  <para>Interested in making a new port, or upgrading existing ports?
+    Great!</para>
 
   <para>What follows are some guidelines for creating a new port for
-    &os;.  If you want to upgrade an existing port, you should read
-    this and then read <xref linkend="port-upgrading"/>.</para>
+    &os;.  To upgrade an existing port, read
+    this, then read <xref linkend="port-upgrading"/>.</para>
 
-  <para>When this document is not sufficiently detailed, you should
-    refer to <filename>/usr/ports/Mk/bsd.port.mk</filename>, which all
-    port Makefiles include.  Even if you do not hack Makefiles daily,
-    it is well commented, and you will still gain much knowledge from
-    it.  Additionally, you may send specific questions to the
+  <para>When this document is not sufficiently detailed,
+    refer to <filename>/usr/ports/Mk/bsd.port.mk</filename>, which is
+    included by all port <filename>Makefile</filename>s.  Even those
+    not hacking <filename>Makefile</filename>s daily can gain much
+    knowledge from it.  Additionally, specific questions can be sent to the
     &a.ports;.</para>
 
   <note>
     <para>Only a fraction of the variables
       (<varname><replaceable>VAR</replaceable></varname>) that can be
       overridden are mentioned in this document.  Most (if not all)
       are documented at the start of
       <filename>/usr/ports/Mk/bsd.port.mk</filename>; the others
       probably ought to be.  Note that this file uses a non-standard
       tab setting: <application>Emacs</application> and
-      <application>Vim</application> should recognize the setting on
+      <application>Vim</application> will recognize the setting on
       loading the file.  Both &man.vi.1; and &man.ex.1; can be set to
       use the correct value by typing
       <command>:set tabstop=4</command> once the file has been
       loaded.</para>
   </note>
 
   <para>
     Looking for something easy to start with? Take a look at the
     <link xlink:href="http://wiki.freebsd.org/WantedPorts">list of
       requested ports</link> and see if you can work on one (or
     more).</para>
 </chapter>