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rS314342: bhyve: document virtio-console in the manpage
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Document virtio-console support, based on the information provided in the commit message for r305898 where this feature was added.

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novel updated this revision to Diff 25081.Feb 13 2017, 2:56 PM
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novel added reviewers: jceel, neel, grehan.Feb 13 2017, 2:58 PM
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A few textual upgrades.

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A maximum of ...

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s/an/a/

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remove the "of"

novel updated this revision to Diff 25134.Feb 14 2017, 4:53 AM
  • Maximum -> A maximum
  • an Unix ... -> a Unix ...
  • remove extra "of"
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Very light on details. A one-sentence description of what the virtio-console actually *is* would be helpful here.

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Avoid contractions: s/There's/There is/
Missing an article: s/use/use the/

novel updated this revision to Diff 25351.Feb 18 2017, 2:16 PM
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  • Extended virtio-console description, fixed articles, there's -> there is.
novel set the repository for this revision to rS FreeBSD src repository - subversion.Feb 18 2017, 2:17 PM
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Done, though that seemed like a common schema to keep these entries short (e.g. see other virtio-* entries above). I pulled the description text from here: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/VirtioSerial#Summary

jceel accepted this revision.Feb 23 2017, 12:50 PM
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I can't really comment on style, but from technical accuracy standpoint it's all good.

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bcr accepted this revision.Feb 25 2017, 3:14 PM
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OK from manpages. Make sure to bump the document date.

novel added a comment.Feb 25 2017, 3:38 PM

Thanks! As I don't have docs/src bit, either somebody needs to commit that or allow me to commit with the appropriate Approved by: line.

bcr added a comment.Feb 25 2017, 4:46 PM

Having only a doc commit bit myself, I can't approve the src part of the change. You need to find someone with a src bit to approve it. Maybe someone from the other reviewers?

grehan accepted this revision.Feb 25 2017, 4:59 PM
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wblock added inline comments.Mar 3 2017, 3:54 PM
head/usr.sbin/bhyve/bhyve.8
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Recommend "at present" rather than "as of now".

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Likewise, "at present" is simpler and clearer.

novel added inline comments.Mar 4 2017, 6:26 AM
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Does that sound like a check for igor(1)?

As this bhyve.8 patch is committed already, do you think it's worth to create a follow up patch to fix that?

wblock added inline comments.Mar 24 2017, 4:09 PM
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Hm. It could go in the rarely-used style suggestions (-y). I'll look at that.

I'd say no second patch is needed for this trivial change, and even .Dd does not need a bump. You can do that, or I can if you like. Thanks!

novel added inline comments.Apr 1 2017, 3:11 PM
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Thanks, I've just committed that.

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