Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml
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--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
     <filename>/usr/ports/distfiles</filename>.</para>
 
   <note>
-    <para>The following steps assume that the software compiled
+    <para>These steps assume that the software compiled
       out-of-the-box.  In other words, absolutely no changes were
       required for the application to work on a &os; system.  If
       anything had to be changed, refer to <xref
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
 CATEGORIES=	games
 MASTER_SITES=	ftp://ftp.cs.columbia.edu/archives/X11R5/contrib/
 
-MAINTAINER=	youremail@example.com
+MAINTAINER=	submitteremail@example.com
 COMMENT=	Cat chasing a mouse all over the screen
 
 .include &lt;bsd.port.mk&gt;</programlisting>
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
 	  <emphasis>Please be careful when copying from the
 	  <filename>README</filename> or manpage</emphasis>; too
 	  often they are not a concise description of the port or
-	  are in an awkward format (e.g., manpages have justified
+	  are in an awkward format (for example, manpages have justified
 	  spacing, which looks particularly bad with monospaced
 	  fonts).</para>
       </note>
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@
 	<emphasis>one</emphasis> of the websites (pick the most
 	common one) with <literal>WWW:</literal> (followed by single
 	space) so that automated tools will work correctly.  If the
-	URI is the root of the website or directory, it should be
+	URI is the root of the website or directory, it has to be
 	terminated with a slash.</para>
 
       <note>
@@ -125,8 +125,8 @@
 	  moved, was renamed, or is hosted elsewhere.</para>
       </note>
 
-      <para>The following example shows how the
-	<filename>pkg-descr</filename> should look:</para>
+      <para>This example shows how
+	<filename>pkg-descr</filename> looks:</para>
 
       <programlisting>This is a port of oneko, in which a cat chases a poor mouse all over
 the screen.
@@ -182,8 +182,8 @@
 	<varname>PLIST_DIRS</varname>, respectively, within the
 	port's <filename>Makefile</filename>.  For instance, we
 	could get along without <filename>pkg-plist</filename> in
-	the above <filename>oneko</filename> port by adding the
-	following lines to the <filename>Makefile</filename>:</para>
+	the above <filename>oneko</filename> port by adding these
+	lines to the <filename>Makefile</filename>:</para>
 
       <programlisting>PLIST_FILES=	bin/oneko \
 		man/man1/oneko.1.gz \
@@ -193,12 +193,12 @@
 		lib/X11/oneko/mouse.xpm
 PLIST_DIRS=	lib/X11/oneko</programlisting>
 
-      <para>Of course, <varname>PLIST_DIRS</varname> should be left
-	unset if a port installs no directories of its own.</para>
+      <para>Of course, <varname>PLIST_DIRS</varname> does not need to
+	be set if a port installs no directories of its own.</para>
 
       <note>
 	<para>Several ports can share a common directory.  In that
-	  case, <varname>PLIST_DIRS</varname> should be replaced by
+	  case, <varname>PLIST_DIRS</varname> must be replaced by
 	  <varname>PLIST_DIRSTRY</varname> so that the directory is
 	  removed only if empty, otherwise it is silently ignored.
 	  <varname>PLIST_DIRS</varname> and
@@ -388,7 +388,7 @@
 	xlink:href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/query-pr-summary.cgi?category=ports"></link>.</para>
 
     <para>After looking at the new port, we will reply if necessary,
-      and put it in the tree.  Your name will also be added to the
+      and put it in the tree.  The submitter's name will also be added to the
       list of <link
 	xlink:href="&url.articles.contributors;/contrib-additional.html">Additional
 	&os; Contributors</link> and other files.</para>