Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-why/chapter.xml
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--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-why/chapter.xml
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-why/chapter.xml
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
     in mind when reading this document.</para>
 
   <para>In &os;, anyone may submit a new port, or volunteer to
-    maintain an existing port if it is unmaintained&mdash;you do not
-    need any special commit privileges to do so.</para>
+    maintain an existing port if it is unmaintained&mdash;no special
+    commit privilege is needed to do so.</para>
 </chapter>