Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/new-port/chapter.xml
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--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/new-port/chapter.xml
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/new-port/chapter.xml
@@ -11,18 +11,18 @@
Making a New Port
- So, you are interested in making your own port or
+ So, interested in making some ports or
upgrading an existing one? Great!
What follows are some guidelines for creating a new port for
- &os;. If you want to upgrade an existing port, you should read
+ &os;. To upgrade an existing port, read
this and then read .
- When this document is not sufficiently detailed, you should
+ When this document is not sufficiently detailed,
refer to /usr/ports/Mk/bsd.port.mk, which all
- port Makefiles include. Even if you do not hack Makefiles daily,
- it is well commented, and you will still gain much knowledge from
- it. Additionally, you may send specific questions to the
+ port Makefiles include. Even if not hacking Makefiles daily,
+ it is well commented, and anyone will still gain much knowledge from
+ it. Additionally, specific questions can be sent to the
&a.ports;.
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
/usr/ports/Mk/bsd.port.mk; the others
probably ought to be. Note that this file uses a non-standard
tab setting: Emacs and
- Vim should recognize the setting on
+ Vim will recognize the setting on
loading the file. Both &man.vi.1; and &man.ex.1; can be set to
use the correct value by typing
:set tabstop=4 once the file has been