diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/advanced-networking/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/advanced-networking/_index.adoc
--- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/advanced-networking/_index.adoc
+++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/advanced-networking/_index.adoc
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
 
 This chapter covers a number of advanced networking topics.
 
-After reading this chapter, you will know:
+Read this chapter to learn:
 
 * The basics of gateways and routes.
 * How to set up USB tethering.
@@ -63,9 +63,9 @@
 * How to set up network PXE booting.
 * How to enable and utilize the features of the Common Address Redundancy Protocol (CARP) in FreeBSD.
 * How to configure multiple VLANs on FreeBSD.
-* Configure bluetooth headset.
+* How to configure a bluetooth headset.
 
-Before reading this chapter, you should:
+Before reading this chapter:
 
 * Understand the basics of the [.filename]#/etc/rc# scripts.
 * Be familiar with basic network terminology.
@@ -1859,13 +1859,13 @@
 [NOTE]
 ****
 If the driver for the wireless interface is not loaded in the `GENERIC` or custom kernel, and the computer is running FreeBSD {rel121-current}, load the corresponding [.filename]#.ko# in [.filename]#/boot/loader.conf# by adding `*driver_load="YES"*` to that file and rebooting.
-Another, better way is to load the driver in [.filename]#/etc/rc.conf# by adding it to `kld_list` (see man:rc.conf[5] for details) in that file and rebooting. 
+Another, better way is to load the driver in [.filename]#/etc/rc.conf# by adding it to `kld_list` (see man:rc.conf[5] for details) in that file and rebooting.
 This is needed because otherwise the driver is not loaded yet at the time the man:lagg[4] interface is set up.
 ****
 
 In this example, the Ethernet interface, _re0_, is the master and the wireless interface, _wlan0_, is the failover.
 The _wlan0_ interface was created from the _ath0_ physical wireless interface, and the Ethernet interface will be configured with the MAC address of the wireless interface.
-First, bring the wireless interface up (replacing _FR_ with your own 2-letter country code), but do not set an IP address.
+First, bring the wireless interface up (replacing _FR_ with the local 2-letter country code), but do not set an IP address.
 Replace _wlan0_ to match the system's wireless interface name:
 
 [source,shell]
@@ -1873,7 +1873,7 @@
 # ifconfig wlan0 create wlandev ath0 country FR ssid my_router up
 ....
 
-Now you can determine the MAC address of the wireless interface:
+Determine the MAC address of the wireless interface like this:
 
 [source,shell]
 ....
@@ -2095,7 +2095,7 @@
 
 When the system boots, memory file systems for [.filename]#/etc# and [.filename]#/var# will be created and mounted and the contents of the [.filename]#cpio.gz# files will be copied into them.
 By default, these file systems have a maximum capacity of 5 megabytes.
-If your archives do not fit, which is usually the case for [.filename]#/var# when binary packages have been installed, request a larger size by putting the number of 512 byte sectors needed (e.g., 5 megabytes is 10240 sectors) in [.filename]#${NFSROOTDIR}/conf/base/etc/md_size# and [.filename]#${NFSROOTDIR}/conf/base/var/md_size# files for [.filename]#/etc# and [.filename]#/var# file systems respectively.
+If the archives do not fit, which is usually the case for [.filename]#/var# when binary packages have been installed, request a larger size by putting the number of 512 byte sectors needed (e.g., 5 megabytes is 10240 sectors) in [.filename]#${NFSROOTDIR}/conf/base/etc/md_size# and [.filename]#${NFSROOTDIR}/conf/base/var/md_size# files for [.filename]#/etc# and [.filename]#/var# file systems respectively.
 
 [[network-pxe-setting-up-dhcp]]
 === Configuring the DHCP Server