Index: books/faq/book.xml
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--- books/faq/book.xml
+++ books/faq/book.xml
@@ -3362,12 +3362,12 @@
 	    deleted, the file is not really removed from the file
 	    system until the program stops using it.  The file is
 	    immediately deleted from the directory listing, however.
-	    As an example, consider a file that is large enough that
-	    its presence affects the output of
+	    As an example, consider a file large enough
+            to affect the output of
 	    <command>du</command> and <command>df</command>.  If this
 	    file is deleted while using <command>more</command> on it,
-	    <command>more</command> does not immediately choke and
-	    complain that it cannot view the file.  The entry is
+	    <command>more</command> does not immediately fail and
+	    error that it cannot view the file.  The entry is
 	    removed from the directory so no other program or user can
 	    access it.  However, <command>du</command> shows that it
 	    is gone as it has walked the directory tree and the