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Authored by debdrup on Jan 15 2021, 5:16 PM.
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Summary

Move sections of the README around a bit, so that it becomes clearer
what belongs where.
Avoid repeating instructions too much, as this makes it more difficult.
Make the timeline easier to get information from at a glance.

While here, fix minor typos, grammatical errors and whitespace errors.

Test Plan

Spell checking and eyes

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Event Timeline

debdrup created this revision.
pauamma_gundo.com added inline comments.
en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/README
10

s/put/putting/

55–56

s/asked to/asked of/
s/attended to/attended/

55–56

Update name?

86–91

s/correspondig/corresponding/

140

October-December 2020

143

URL is inconsistent with link text.

144

49, 45, or 42?

148–151

s/=/)/

debdrup marked 8 inline comments as done.

Address feedback from PauAmma.

Also rewrap overlong lines while here.

en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/README
115–116

s/needs/requires/ since you made that same change further down

140

2020

debdrup marked 2 inline comments as done.

Address feedback from PauAmma.

This revision was not accepted when it landed; it landed in state Needs Review.Jan 16 2021, 2:30 PM
This revision was automatically updated to reflect the committed changes.