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@@ -473,15 +473,15 @@
 
       <para>The completed Errata Notice template should be emailed
 	together with either a patch against the &branch.releng;
-	branch or a list of revisions against the &branch.stable;
+	branch or a list of revisions from the &branch.stable;
 	branch.</para>
 
       <para>For Errata Notice requests immediately following the
-	release, the request should be emailed to both &team.re; and
-	&team.secteam;.  Once the &branch.releng; branch has been
-	handed over to &team.secteam; as described in <xref
+	release, the request should be emailed to both the &team.re; and
+	the &team.secteam;.  Once the &branch.releng; branch has been
+	handed over to the &team.secteam; as described in <xref
 	  linkend="releng-wrapup-handoff"/>, Errata Notice requests
-	should be sent to &team.secteam;.</para>
+	should be sent to the &team.secteam;.</para>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 xml:id="releng-wrapup-handoff">