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Authored by linimon on Jul 15 2017, 1:22 PM.
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We can delete the usage of "link <here>". In addition, there is extra verbiage about "the table above" which isn't even right.

Tighten this paragraph up.

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This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Jul 15 2017, 4:00 PM

The href looks wrong (please see https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup-links.html), but the idea is good. Making the "supported releases" into a link also would be nice, if possible.

en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/security.xml
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How about "a supported release"?

linimon edited edge metadata.

update wording.

I have left the link as it already was in the text because it matches the (broken) style of every other link in the document.

This revision now requires review to proceed.Jul 24 2017, 9:57 PM
en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/security.xml
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Ah, the table is now below (immediately after) the text. So how about this:

encouraged to upgrade to one of these supported releases:</p>
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Address point raised.

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Aug 25 2017, 1:46 PM
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