We can delete the usage of "link <here>". In addition, there is extra verbiage about "the table above" which isn't even right.
Tighten this paragraph up.
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The href looks wrong (please see https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup-links.html), but the idea is good. Making the "supported releases" into a link also would be nice, if possible.
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| 140 ↗ | (On Diff #30814) | How about "a supported release"? |
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update wording.
I have left the link as it already was in the text because it matches the (broken) style of every other link in the document.
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| 140 ↗ | (On Diff #30814) | Ah, the table is now below (immediately after) the text. So how about this: encouraged to upgrade to one of these supported releases:</p> |